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A marketing masterclass from cars sales
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- @steven_n_t
This marketing masterclass from cars can be applied to software, ai, marketplaces, agencies etc
i found probably one the greatest pieces of copy ever written. this marketing masterclass from cars can be applied to software, ai, marketplaces, agencies etc
the car industry is obsessed with proving value through features, specs, and promises, they chose to say almost nothing.
but in saying almost nothing, they said everything.
they understood something deeper about confidence in marketing
the less you say, the more weight each word carries.
leaves it to the imagination
perfect example of when you genuinely have something great you don't need to explain it you just need to hint at it
every extra word actually reduces the impact
every added claim weakens the core promise
every feature list kills the mystery
how to write clean copy that people love:
strip away everything that isn't absolutely essential the best lines have nothing left to remove
say the obvious truth you've been avoiding dancing around it makes you sound weak
write like you're telling a friend then delete half of those words
shorter sentences hit harder your copy isn't a novel
confidence lives in white space give your words room to breathe
stop trying to sound smart big words make small points
if it sounds like marketing delete it and start over
write drunk, edit sober then edit sober again
kill every adjective let nouns do the work
read it out loud your ear knows when you're lying
now, i drive a volvo, not a land rover, ive actually heard that land lovers arent that reliable, maybe people return every few months for maintenance lol... but hope this copy chat got your creative juices flowing.
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